Heir of Silence - 19 Dec 2002 10:41 pm
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Simple, useless little poem I wrote in my French II class...
I close my eyes
let it all slowly fade
drifting 'way from the cries
and letting down my weight
I unclench my fists now
giving way to tears
with bloody kerchief, I wipe my brow
though my vision never clears
I let myself fall back
into my dark abyss
and as my sight doth fade to black
my fate is sealed with a kiss
Aroura - 19 Dec 2002 11:30 pm
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That is an awsome poem... I wish I could write that good...
Heir of Silence - 21 Dec 2002 01:55 am
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Ha! You silly, beautiful person. You CAN write that well. It's just a matter of inspiration (occasionally), and practice
I have no special talent
Red Hot Holly - 21 Dec 2002 02:33 am
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You DO have talent! Lots of it!
Heir of Silence - 22 Dec 2002 01:31 am
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You do not pay attention to what I say
Aroura - 22 Dec 2002 01:23 pm
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Heh, thanks n.n I guess I can be an ok writer at times...
I also guess I down myself because nobody really says much about the stuff I write or draw...(irl that is)
Heir of Silence - 22 Dec 2002 08:23 pm
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IRL....everybody either doesn't care, or will say 'amazing' to anything you show them, because they're just that jolly good of a pal
Aroura - 22 Dec 2002 11:32 pm
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*nods* So very true... Of course it doesn't help when nobody's given me any constructive critisim here either...
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