td yuy - 14 Dec 2002 08:54 pm
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My darkened Heart,my darkened Soul
Beautifully devoured by your holly prayers
And now I sit,
And now I cry,
Hopelessly,hopelessly wondering Why!
Why did I seek you?
Why did I want you?
Why did I believe you?
Why did I need you!!
You who I will always love....
Need you like the air I breathe
Need you like the blood that pumps through my body,
The Blood that keeps me alive.
You,your body!
Your Mind and your Soul!!
I needed you more than I needed my mother!
You,who I loved!
The pain that I feel,the emotions I trust
The feelings I need and foolishly believe in.
Why do they torment me?
Your abuse!
It destroyed me,bit by bit.
It,wich I had loved,and needed to keep me alive!
Your stupid beliefs
Your stupid ideas
Your stupid punishments!!
They destroyed me...
slowly and painfully...
as I followed you,As I trusted you!
And now as I look down upon your bloody corpse,
I don't feel the slightest bit of guilt,
Nor do I feel the slightest bit of remorse for you.
Me who I loved with all my heart
Amadeus - 15 Dec 2002 11:18 am
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Nice one
Could probably do without the !! bits though, but that's just my very very humble opinion.
For an 11yr old you write scarily vivid poetry.
Guyver - 16 Dec 2002 09:42 am
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great poetry as usual. u are the few ppl's poetry i read
lloyd - 17 Dec 2002 08:55 am
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cool.
td yuy - 17 Dec 2002 11:16 am
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thank you
Allie - 19 Dec 2002 11:16 pm
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oh wow....i totally got emotionally into your poem...I LOVE IT!
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